Yes, I do believe I really revise. For one importance of revising is it is very important for a student to revise their paper, because a student is bound to make mistakes. The reason I decide to revise is because I know that I can frequently make mistakes in my writing, and it is important for me to fix my mistakes. Revising has plenty of benefits. For one, with revising a paper, the person is able to get  another person's impute on the paper. With another person's impute you are able to get a view that you could not get by you just reading your paper. If you only read your own paper, then their is a bias on your paper, and you may not see some of the mistakes as you would in someone else reading your paper. 

The revisions that I plan to do to my essay 3 are fixing a lot of grammar errors. A major thing that I want to focus in fixing my essay 3 is to make sure I stay in contact with my thesis statement. I noticed that when my paper was sent back to me, I was drifting from my thesis a lot. That is one thing that I know that I will lose points on. With this being said I also want to make sure that I have a clear understanding of a thesis statement. I know that I can make my these statement stronger, and that is exactly what I am going to do.