Yes, I do believe I really revise. For one importance of revising is it is very important for a student to revise their paper, because a student is bound to make mistakes. The reason I decide to revise is because I know that I can frequently make mistakes in my writing, and it is important for me to fix my mistakes. Revising has plenty of benefits. For one, with revising a paper, the person is able to get  another person's impute on the paper. With another person's impute you are able to get a view that you could not get by you just reading your paper. If you only read your own paper, then their is a bias on your paper, and you may not see some of the mistakes as you would in someone else reading your paper. 

The revisions that I plan to do to my essay 3 are fixing a lot of grammar errors. A major thing that I want to focus in fixing my essay 3 is to make sure I stay in contact with my thesis statement. I noticed that when my paper was sent back to me, I was drifting from my thesis a lot. That is one thing that I know that I will lose points on. With this being said I also want to make sure that I have a clear understanding of a thesis statement. I know that I can make my these statement stronger, and that is exactly what I am going to do.

In "Winters Bone" by Daniel Woodrell, a young teenage girl has to do everything in her power to save her family from losing their house. Ree Dolly the teenager has to cope with a mentally disabled mother, take care of two young siblings, and deal with a meth addict father. This book will make the reader feel sad, strong, and be racing through the pages reading through the excitement. Ree Dolly lives in poverty, and that is all she knows. Ree has to deal with all these situations, and has to find her missing father who put their house up for sell, to pay his bond. Now Ree has to go looking for her father to bring him back. While in the process of finding her father she finds out information about other living styles, and her own distant family as well. This book will make the reader feel sad, strong, and be racing through the pages reading through the excitement.

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